Tuesday 1 September 2015

look at my revised writing

                                                        RED-_-(:<3!!!
Red is the color of blood flowing through my veins.
Red tastes like delicious cooked crayfish in the warm hot fire.
Red is like the deathly red poppies whistling to me in flanders field.

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1 comment:

  1. Miss Hines1 September 2015 at 15:20

    Alvin-Lee you are a writer!! The language you have used has really created an image in my mind! Keep up the awesome writing!

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